Check this out team - I think we could make an awesome pick - a - path story too. What do you think? Have a read through this one and leave a comment about how the story went for you.
I have read the one that the boy was late for the plane and he picked winter clothes and he went to board the he realized he was on the wrong plane and then he picked Hawai and then the plane fell down and he when the plane crashed he swam to this island and started to live there. That was all just a dream and he went to go on a bus for a trip and he wasnt late.
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ReplyDeleteI have read the one that the boy was late for the plane and he picked winter clothes and he went to board the he realized he was on the wrong plane and then he picked Hawai and then the plane fell down and he when the plane crashed he swam to this island and started to live there. That was all just a dream and he went to go on a bus for a trip and he wasnt late.
ReplyDeleteI liked it because there was lots of drama and action. its really hard to describe anyway a 9/10 i really liked it!
ReplyDeleteI went to alaska i went to a restront i held on i killed a poler bear
ReplyDeleteWhat I did was... Got summer clothes and then went to Alaska then went to a restoront and held on.
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